Saturday, May 16, 2009

Rubefacient Remarks


I'm just not used to being single. At the end of the day, I always had someone.
Let me be that someone.

She was speechless. Whatever it was she was expecting, it wasn't this. She never knew he thought of her in that way or that he had feelings for her. Ecstatic.

He took her silence as a polite decline.
It's okay if you don't want to...
It's not that. It's just... Y-you took me by surprise.
I wasn't going to say anything this soon but I didn't want to fall in your circle of friends... We'll take it slow.

The way those simple words made her feel. She felt warm inside and was almost sure she was blushing. She smiled. He was the epitome of perfection to her.

15 comments:

Anonymous said...

ya7a'6ha :( it sure must feel nice knowing someone you consider as perfect loves you.

Ex-clamation Mark said...

They aren't in love.
It's more like the cheesiness in the beginning of new relationships.

frogman said...

ex-clamation.. your comment summarized what i wanted to say perfectly lol. the thing is, in retrospect i realize how cheesy we all were at the beginning, yet at the time felt very smooth and suave.. hehe

Ex-clamation Mark said...

I completely agree! At the moment, it seems like the perfect thing to say but later when you about what was said you blush from all the cheesiness -_- lol

female symphony said...

Sometimes the way the other person treats u can change alot of things/If he's showing interest and treating her with love even when she's considering him as a friend can make her fall in love with him one day. While reading this, I remebered sth that happened to my friend

Ex-clamation Mark said...

I completely agree with you. Not just the way they treat you, it could be just one word. But one point of clarity, she's not considering him as a friend.

Nutter said...

lets face it we like this stuff, and we wanna hear it even if we say we don't.. i sure as hell miss it! bel 3arabi taqdeer!!!

i just read this post, clearly, i need to catch up but you never fail me ex, the way you write makes me picture it just like a movie scene.. mashaAllah 3alaich :***

and plz don't be mad at me.. i'll do anything to redeem myself (hug)

Ex-clamation Mark said...

True, true!

Aww thank you "GB" aka Nutter now -_- I thought it was a new blogger lol

Of course I'm not mad at you, bes ntdala3 3layk shway *HUGS*

Anonymous said...

Stupid question, are all those posts related? wella every post is a short story?

Ex-clamation Mark said...

They are related but they aren't the same guy. I don't think I've made it very clear, but you can tell from the tags who it is :P

Does that make sense? :P

A 3 AM Flight said...

Was he a close friend at first?

Cooookies said...

He wasnt a clsoe friend yet he feels that way ? Sigh thats nice :/

Ex-clamation Mark said...

Well, he likes her.
It is, isn't it :)

Anonymous said...

As corny as it sounds, the start of relationships are always so nice..the butterflies and simple words that make you smile..the innocence of it all! its great! lol

Ex-clamation Mark said...

It is great! I love it :P