Sunday, August 02, 2009

Inviolable Commitment

To her it was not a chore nor a forced upon task.
It was done volitionally and more importantly, with love.

Commitment seemed like such a bold, impregnable word whereas on the other hand it occurred naturally to her. With such suave. It wasn't like before. At least not for her. There was more effort, time, and energy invested into making this work. Long-term material. Talking to other people wasn't a distraction anymore. More like a mere nuisance that she brushed off.

It was love. Maybe not the whole head-over-heels love nor the intoxicated black hole love. Other people's definitions didn't do the term justice. All romantic attempts aside, she just couldn't care about another person this much without loving them.

He made her heart sing. Prance around in her rib cage. To say she was speechless would be too off. She had so much to say about him, how he made her feel, how much she loved him that she wouldn't know how to start, where...


She was his clingy girlfriend and that's all that mattered.

7 comments:

Carpe Diem said...

I'm confused :/
The dates don't make sense to me.
Hmph.

Commitment. Let alone inviolable commitment is a state I'd never reach. Such strain, and energy drain!
But then again, maybe love does things to people. I wouldn't know.

I think its safer not to care. And not to cling. Just alot safer, you know?

Anyway, may I never live the day where I'd be called 'clingy' :p

Enjoyed the post! It sort of confirmed my growing insensitivity ;p but I guess I like it that way?

Ex-clamation Mark said...

Oh sorry about the date, it's fixed now.

I never thought I'd ever reach this stage either but here I am. It's not really hard especially not when you want to. I think that's how it's different.

Of course it's safer not to care! That way you'll never get hurt. But some people make you care whether you like it or not and others make you care even more and then you don't care about how much you care :P

Clingy is bad when it's on one side only.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

You like being insensitive? -_-

desertpalms said...

Interesting choice of vocabulary..

inviolable, inviolable

isnt that a tongue twister? try saying it 7times real quick..(i dunno why 7..but it sounds like a good no of times, no?)

Hmm, normally I would say that a dependance upon Anyone is to detriment of You..making you weak and needy and unable to function as your own entity..

But I wont..since you seem happy, dom enshallah!

missed your posts and i'm happy your back X! *throws a dozen candy canes over your head*

okay no..=S that musta hurt =/ sorry!

Ex-clamation Mark said...

Lol I can barely say it once let alone 7 times :P and 7 is my favorite number so yaaay -_-

No, it's not detriment of me! It's just a new side of me =O lool I tried to arage3 that but whatever haha :P

I missed my blog and of course the great DP! *throws rice at DP*

That does hurt *throws empty glass bottle at DP*

It's outta love, I promise :$

Carpe Diem said...

I guess this 'stage' sort of takes you by surprise and creeps up into a small corner of your mind and then suddenly dominates :P

I don't know...Maybe I will if I ever get there? Well, I can imagine if you want to commit it would be easily done. But the thing is, when you commit to another person, its difficult in terms of the nature of us human beings and the way we have a way of making things so complicated with misunderstandings and so on. I'm guessing the key is to find someone willing to put just as much committment as you are right? And well, if you had clingy and clingy I would imagine it would be a very snug ride :P


As for insensitivity, its the lesser of the two evils. It's how you pick yourself up and move on, despite all.

Anonymous said...

GLASS BOTTLES??

WE'RE USING GLASS BOTTLES NOW!!

you took it too far this time, x...

Watch Your Back is all i gotta say! MUAAAAAAHAHAHAHAHA >=)

Ex-clamation Mark said...

Carpe Diem:
It does take you by surprise, creeps up on you when you least expect it and freaks you out! Makes you rethink all prior decisions. But to be honest, I'm not sure it's all about 'wanting' to commit. For me, it was a natural occurrence. It just happened.

Desert Palms:
No we're not! =O
It's just5 wagtaha there was a glass bottle next to me and I tend to throw stuff that are next to me virtually, I promise :$
*hands DP huge jar of gummi bears*
Forgive meeeeeee!